The video

(Marie)Me and (Liza,Hannah,Taylor)my friend were going to a party at 9 pm and we leave at 11 pm.

While we’re going home we used our cellphones.Taylor is busy texting her boyfriend, Hannah is uploading her photos and also I am, while Liza is reading horror stories, watching scary videos and writing some stories too.

1 minute later …….

We’re started talking about what we’re doing.Liza got a text from her group in facebook.It said most scary video, she said to us,”Girlllsss can we have sit for a while and watch this scary”.We all said Yesss.

While we’re watching the video we’re getting colder and scary.

We all shout when we see the last part of the video.Liza’s phone started to glitch, we run to our home and started to separate.

When I’m home I see dad lying on the floor with a mask. I didn’t shout my heart’s beating is so fast I cry with no tears. I go outside and call the police.

(Police speaking) Hello this is the police….. Hello…… Someone…… Please speak…..

I said my last word,”help “(with a dying breath)

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4 Replies to “The video

  1. The concept of the story is good….. but there are some grammatical errors …so I think you can work in that sphere.

  2. @vanisha singh

    Umm i think there are no grammatical errors though but a little of them by the way,TO THE WRITER: is this a real story kenken?

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